Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life's others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered that the experience that a

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goes through before pre-school has a great influence on the

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life

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of a

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. Based on

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experiences

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it has both psychological and physiological

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on the

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. There are a lot of factors that

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the educational ability of a

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, through the childhood upbringing and activities carried out during

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space of

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teenage

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experiences

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was said to have

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a greater influence on the

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expectations of the teen. The

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life style

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and experience that a teenager finds

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himself

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him self

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himself

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affects the

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, it actually makes or destroys the

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. Knowing that the

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is birthed by the school

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in

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current generation and

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educational

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with

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one is called a

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from 6

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to 13

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of

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. The

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of a

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goes down to his early or childhood upbringing, family relationships, (for illustration having parents that are separated),

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activities. A

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that knows how to read and write at the

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of 9years to 10

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shows he had

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early teaching and practice. Having abilities like critical

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thinking

increases intellectual level. They are

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that affect the physiology of a

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such

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as

adults

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molestation,

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and parents

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parents

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separation. lack of family care,

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regulation

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child

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the child

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needs like, food, water, love and protection and encouragement,

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this

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are

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physical activities that can influence the

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of a

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.

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from the other stand of the table, teenagers

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said to have more

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that may affect

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they

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future

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experience can boil down to peer pressure, low

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, adult molestation,

exposure

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to pornography that

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the dopamine in the brain marking the individual less active in his or her educational activity. A teen is one from the

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of 13years to 18

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.

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also

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affects the

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ability to understand,

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intellectual information, it reduces the IQ level, it was noted that

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they

is

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formation

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of black patches on the dopamine in the brain.

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also

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affects critical thinking etc.

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study was carried out at the university of Barnes

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(2013) by a research student from a medical report of Doctor Ben lens.

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is said to have played a great deal in the

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life

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of

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teens. In

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based on my opinion

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that

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teens have greater factors that

influences

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their

future

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life

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during

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they

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days of educational training,

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will

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that the

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of a

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before starting school can affect the

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child's

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future

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life

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the more.