Some people believe that education trip or excursion helps promote overall holistic learning. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

According to a majority of ,people it is known that

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within the scope of academics help to improve the ability of the

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to learn in the

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. Excursion I agree to be one of the most powerful ways by which

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do well in school and

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it promote easy learning, teamwork. It

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has other advantages sure as improving understanding of a particular subject or topic, it

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makes

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be vast on not limited to what is written in the test books or what was thought in the classroom or the lecture hall.

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excursions

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and academic trip improves the ability of scholars to learn and improves the understanding of the topics that were thought in school.

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in 2015 research was carried out at Barnes university on history

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to compare the learning ability of

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that go on educational

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and does that

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in the classroom only. The result shows that the scholars that engage in

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have a higher understanding of subjects and topics within the

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of

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excursion

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helps to promote enlightenment to many

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of academic

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. It makes

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not to be limited in

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academic experience thereby making them vast in

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when a nursing student in training is being posted to more than one hospital unit for practicals,

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makes them more vast and to know many aspects of nursing practice. Here by making them vast. It was

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proven that those

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in history class who engaged in

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lecture learnt other aspects that were not thought in their classroom. In ,

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I totally argue that exposing

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and scholars to

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and academic trips makes the

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more vast and

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improves understanding of the

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of

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