In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In certain nations, the populace

believe

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that it is crucial to acquire a

home

instead

of renting one. The major reasons for these are the desire for safety and respect from the society which in my opinion is an advantageous trend. One major reason, why people desire their own houses is the need for high regard from their neighbours and families . In some countries, landlords and landladies are seen as influential individuals who are well respected and valued in the community owing to the fact that they are automatically rich individuals.

For instance

, in my community house owners are usually respected and they are the

decision makers

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in my society.

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, members of

the

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society view safety as a vital factor and so they struggle to erect their own

buldings

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buildings

to avoid

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forced out of their hired houses and thereby rendering them homeless and frustrated.

Thus

individuals have a

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deep-seated

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deep seated

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desire to build their own homes.

However

,

this

is a beneficial trend owing to the fact that it will not only lead to decreased expenses but

also

reduced price tag on house rents. The individual who has acquired a

home

does not need to pay

rents

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again,

thus

enabling him to save and

to

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channel his income into other opportunities

such

as establishing a business of his choice.

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example

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a friend of mine who managed to secure his own

home

have

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also

established a business because he no longer pays rent.

Furthermore

, when there

are

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increasing

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number of people who are owning their own homes, the demand for rented apartments will decline which will

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inturn

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reduce the exorbitant prices placed by landlords on

rentage

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renting

rent

.

Therefore

, there are many positive results to having

ones

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own

home

. In conclusion, citizens believe that building a house is vital rather than hiring and, in my opinion, I think that it is a positive outcome because it will lead to more savings and reduced prices on

hired

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the hired

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apartment

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.