Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With the
advent of technology, had pushed Change preposition
The
people
to adapt the
fast pace life by offering too many choices in terms of lifestyle, Change preposition
to the
transport
, food
, etc. I lean towards the agreement of a given statement by emphasing
on possible points with relatable examples.
Correct your spelling
emphasizing
To begin
with, earlier
lives of the Correct article usage
the earlier
people
was
depended upon a stock they had acquired from their harvest which used to be produced two times a year. But nowadays, Unnecessary verb
apply
Food
as Change preposition
with Food
primary
source, Add an article
a primary
the primary
people
have no time to cook food
after tiring work hours. Instead
, they prefer to purchase the packed food
that can be prepared within a Correct quantifier usage
few minutes
minutes
in Fix the agreement mistake
minute
microwave
or ends up with footfall Add an article
the microwave
a microwave
to
Change preposition
in
restaurant
. Add an article
the restaurant
a restaurant
For instance
, The
frozen peas Correct article usage
apply
is
available everywhere which was used to appear in season once a year. Change the verb form
are
Otherwise
, packed dry peas is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
also
an option in any supermart at Correct your spelling
reasonable
resonable
price. Correct article usage
a resonable
In addition
, Mangoes which arrive in the summer season,
can be consumed Remove the comma
apply
any
time in the form of Change preposition
at any
tetrapack
juice.
Correct your spelling
tetra pack
On the other hand
, Today's transport
facility is ubiquitous in every ways
Change to a singular noun
way
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
include
road, air, loco, and water medium as compared to earlier times which were limited to Wrong verb form
including
animal pulled
carts in order to access the public Add a hyphen
animal-pulled
transport
facilities that were present in distinct places from rural areas. for example
, The capital of India, Delhi city has various options for transport
. nearly a decade ago there was only public bus transport
to reach the particular destination. now due to increase
in development, It has Correct article usage
the increase
Metro-Rail
network for Correct article usage
a Metro-Rail
rapid
movement of Correct article usage
the rapid
people
. In addition
, most of
Change preposition
apply
people
prefer their Add an article
the people
owned
vehicle to access the airport for foreign travel.
In conclusion, there are many choices. Replace the word
own
Hence
, in future
there will even more choices in Add a comma
,future
variety
of things that Add an article
a variety
people
want which will eventually make their life easier.Submitted by lushennandanwar.ln on
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