Government should spend money on railways trather than roads, to what extent do you agree or disagree.

Spending financial resources on

railways

instead

of roads is considered a

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necessity

for

government

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around the world.

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to

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development and

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on

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the reasons in the body paragraph and eventually draw

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to that. To commute

with

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,

railways

offer a safe commuting experience both for the citizens and traders.

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is because train passengers do not have

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the congestion most road users experience and trains can

acheive

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achieve

much higher speeds than cars.

Therefore

people will spend less time commuting and more time doing something more productive and

this

will benefit the entire society. To buttress my point, the British government recently

unvieledplans

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unveiled plans

to construct cities in the North of England via a

high speed

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rail network and

this

will reduce commuting times by half allowing thousands of people in the Midlands to work in London.

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locomotives

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to be less harmful to the environment than cars.

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is due to the fact that a train of passengers

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thus

prevents the use of hundreds of internal combustion engines

thus

reducing the number of

carbon

dioxide

emissions. If

this

is repeated

everyday

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over many different routes, the reduction of

carbon

dioxide

footprints is highly significant.

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instance

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Minh City will soon open its

first

underground metro service and

this

will reduce the number of cars and motorbikes on the road. One of the main benefits to the city is the improvement of

carbon

dioxide

emissions because of

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in traffic. In conclusion, after considering

and

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less

carbon

dioxide

emissions as the main reasons government should spend more money on

railways

rather than roads, I can strongly say without any doubt in my mind that the use of

railways

should be encouraged to provide

safe

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environment for members in

this

society.