Write about the following topic. Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

The common
people
are always keen to know about the personal
life
of
celebrities
. The
media
gives coverage to popular stars
as
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an
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when they
apprear
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appear
in public.
This
essay will discuss
about
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private
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the private
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life
of well know
people
and
difficulties
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the difficulties
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being faced due to stardom. The
celebrities
are being considered
as
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an
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ideal and motivating
personality
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personalities
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by millions.
People
become crazy for a glimpse of their favourite
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sportsman
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sports man
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sportsman
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or movie personality and
hence
maintaining
secracy
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secrecy
security
of their private
life
is very important. All human
being
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beings
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wish to live
free
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a free
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life
without any
inconvinience
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inconvenience
;
however
,
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the
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media
always try to capture all movements of
celebrities
and air
it
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them
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. Several times, TV channels
shows
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vaction
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vacation
trips of famous
people
without their prior permission. The
media
plays a huge role in society. The
media
creates paid news for
marketting
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marketing
and to increase publicity of their channels by any means.
People
should respect for private
life
of famous
people
and
do
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not interfere in
any one's
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anyone's
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life
.
Moreover
,
celebrities
themselves should not create hype to stay in limelight and maintain normalcy. The understanding and cooperation of
media
and common
people
would provide
healthy
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a healthy
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and sustainable atmosphere
to
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everyone to live a good
life
. There is always
price
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a price
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one has to pay for their achievement and
that is
quite higher in
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the case
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of famous personalities. to
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pay of
In my view, famous
people
shall be treated with great respect and their private
life
shall be equally
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respected
by
media
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the media
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to create good harmonies.
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