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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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The idea of communications has been drastically improved with the advancement of technology. In the olden days, the action of
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 postal diary.
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written letters and recent changes due to easy access to technology. The requirement
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 fast-track two-
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 has increased with technological development.
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, tracking of
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 system is required to monitor real-time progress and
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 can not fulfil the necessity. Writing
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 can definitely improve
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communication
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 skills and help to build up professional vocabulary which is getting sacrificed in phone calls and SMS. In
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 adds more value to the business. Email and messenger
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 through the internet are faster and more economical while
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written letters may take more time and are costly. The privacy of information would be at risk while communicating via biography. Sometimes, telephone or short message
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 can not serve the exact purpose of business considering a periodic auditing system. The legal auditing team may demand exact proof and evidence of all the
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 carried out with suppliers and external agencies and
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would be more effective rather than depending only on one approach of conversation.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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