Today increasingly, more people have freedom to work or live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this system outweigh disadvantages?

Nowadays, it is true that the

technology

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developments

on

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communication and transportation aspect made it possible for

people

to live and do

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the job

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job

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on

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every corner of the world. One of the most heated debates is whether

this

trend is beneficial. For my part,

although

some drawbacks related to

this

phenomenon, I believe there are actually more merits to be gained from

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. On the one hand, the workers face some downsides. One disadvantage would be

that

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the low working efficiency for

staffs

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.

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, the worker who works at home

tend

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to feel a sense of loneliness because there is no colleague around them and there is no working environment which is helpful for them to concentrate. As a consequence, the officers are prone to suffer from

mental

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disease

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like social

disorder

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,

resulting

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a low-efficient performance in their job and life.

On the other hand

, I believe that both

people

and companies can have access to more benefits. The

first

merit is that it increases

chance

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for adults to chase

for

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a higher salary. The goal for an individual to work is to earn money.

However

, there

is

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some opportunities to make more money in a foreign country, due to the

advance

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technology like plane and train,

people

can achieve their own goal and live a better life by moving to a new place

to

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. As

such

, the company will face the advantage which is led by the development of technology. A company can

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expend

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its business

aboard

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,

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or transforms

to

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an international company to make lucrative profits and enlarge

the

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reputation and influence. To conclude, the transformation of the communication system and transportation system

have

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affected

people

in a large number of aspects, despite some demerits indeed exist, I believe the benefits are more in

number

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of

this

trend.