You have read an article in a newspaper that contains incorrect information about your town/city. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper to inform them about the mistake. In your letter - Describe your knowledge of the city. - Explain what information was incorrect in your opinion. - Suggest how the editor could fix this error.

Dear sir or madam, I am writing
this
letter because I read your article in the newspaper on my Ludhiana town. Truly, it was a great article which I read about Ludhiana
city
but I want to correct you on some points which are visiting
places
and traffic of the
city
.
Firstly
, Ludhiana is a very beautiful
city
. It is known for the lifestyle and advancement of the
city
. People come from different
places
to get jobs and earn good education due to highly industries and educational institutes .
Secondly
, I want to tell you the most interesting
places
which you forget to mention in the piece. There are numerous
places
to visit like model town , clothing market and food courts. These are the main attractions where the public spends their most time. At
last
, I
also
recommend you mention the traffic problems of the
city
so, if anyone wants to come he should know the traffic conjunction of some areas. I hope you take immediate action on my letter and
also
reprint
this
article again with the correct information. Yours sincerely, Harpreet Singh
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