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Your friend has been offered a place on course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advise about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email -Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university -Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation -Warm him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation write at least 150 words.

#friend #place #course #university #email #-describe #student #-recommend #accommodation #-warm #mistakes #students
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Dear Andrea, Congratulations
for
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 making it to the '
University
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 of Maryland', I am so proud and happy for you! The 'construction management' course at the
university
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 is highly reputed. I am
surely
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 you'll be doing wonders after you graduate. I remember you mentioning
about
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apply
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university
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accommodation
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 in your voicemail. There are plenty of on-campus and off-campus options available for
accommodation
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. When I was attending the
university
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, I stayed in
an
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off-campus
accommodation
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, since it was cheaper than the on-campus one. I stayed in a nice
cozy
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 apartment located at '1575 Tremont Street', it is just 2 blocks away from the student centre, near the subway line. I will share
contact
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 details of my landlord and you can find out if the place is still available. I would
also
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 suggest looking for
accommodation
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 vacancies on the
university
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's online student portal
,
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 since many students post their requirements for a roommate or available vacant spot in an apartment online.
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 is indeed
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the best way to get to know people,
places
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and places
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 and to check out
university
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 accommodations. While looking for
accommodation
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, be wary of scamsters around you. Some people disguise themselves as landlords or roommates on the
university
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's student portal and try to extract your contact or financial information and use it for other their own means. Many students make
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 mistake of trusting random people online. So please be very careful. I am so excited for you and can't wait to meet you at the
university
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! I am flying down there
next
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 month. Your Friend, Jay
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