Present a written argument or case study to an educational reader with no specialised knowledge of the following topic: The overuse of natural resources causes an ultimate exhaust of them. People have been using them to be in the swim of new styles such as making new furniture of recent design. This causes a huge harm to the environment. Therefore, the government should discourage people the overuse of these resources. To what extent do you support or oppose the idea?

It is clear that human beings have a huge impact on the environment. The overuse of natural
resources
causes a lot of exhaust of them.
This
essay will explore two of the problems which have resulted from these changes and propose measures which might address them.
People
have been using much of the natural
resources
to bring some style to their life. In my opinion, humans are selfish and did not reflect on the consequences.
For example
, the overuse of wood and Bamboo plant in our constructions and to have some natural styles in our homes, furniture or building causes deforestation. Even more, the desperation of animals. Pandas ,
for example
, can't have much of nutrition
resources
because
people
are using them for building. The bamboo plant needs above 10 years to grow up a
then
be consumed by Pandas.
People
have to share these
resources
equally and carefully and the government has to interdiction deforestation. Maybe, replace our live style with materiels much durable. I believe that the biggest, most important problem of the overuse of natural
resources
causes global warming. The climate changes faster than we thought.
As a result
, of all the natural disasters and the desperation of animals and plants, the pole north is melting. All these problems are caused by
people
's technology and all the devices that we used
such
as our transport. The government has to do something quickly to replace cars and aeroplanes with green
resources
. Put another more and more of the public green transports. In short, the government has the responsibility to change the bad way of using natural
resources
. Reduce our consumption and share the fortunes of our earth with animals and plants. And stopping to be selfish and thinking about global warming more seriously.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable exploitation
  • environmental degradation
  • mitigate
  • reliance
  • finite resources
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity
  • sustainable sourcing
  • eco-friendly
  • consumer behavior
  • conservation
  • incentives
  • depletion
  • soil degradation
  • air pollution
  • collective shift
  • indispensable
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