Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Others disagree and say this is no longer true. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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graduate
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is an excellent tool to have
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in
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,but some others  oppose
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an impression.I  too believe that even without a
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people
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can become successful as the true key to
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lies in the determination ,perseverance and mindset of an individual.  
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education
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does not give a guarantee
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a comfortable
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and wealthy
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is because many students attend universities just for having fun, minimum attendance to be eligible for writing the final exam,cram the portions during study holidays and thereby receive the
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with the least effort.
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lack the necessary skills and knowledge required to survive in the real world.
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,once graduated they are unable to utilize the
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in hand in the highly competitive market due to
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of basic
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skills.   Whereas some highly intelligent and smart
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are denied
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education
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due to lack of money or social situation.But those
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strong willed
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people
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make use of the limited resources available to them to build their steps
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success
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,some of the top sports
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or celebrities do not have high formal
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,yet they are
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with all kinds of luxuries available to them.
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shows that the right mindset,motivation,mental strength and the ability to dream are the true indicators of
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in a person’s
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.   To conclude,I believe that a mere college
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cannot determine the
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of a person’s
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.
Education
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is important and can be learned from university or through
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experience and
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a university
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opens door to more opportunities,the main factor is the personal mindset and belief.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • university degree
  • specialized knowledge
  • critical thinking skills
  • networking opportunities
  • vocational training
  • self-made entrepreneurs
  • gig economy
  • online courses
  • certifications
  • formal education
  • practical experience
  • lifelong learning
  • career goals
  • individual circumstances
  • academic qualifications
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