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People in the modern world have a greater number of health problems compared to people in the past due to the fact that they have an unhealthy eating habit. Do you agree with the statement?

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Nowadays, It is often thought that modern
people
 have more
health
 problems than
people
 in the past caused by unhealthy nutrition. In my opinion, I do not agree with the statement.
This
 essay will explore two mains subject of my disagreement.
Firstly
, modern
people
 have much consent and take care of their
health
 by visiting regularly the doctor and making a full body
check-up
Fix the agreement mistake
check-ups
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. Having
health
 care insurance more than ever. There are
also
 many
health
 programmes on our smartphones to remind us of our hard pulsation, breathing and having a healthy lifestyle. Even when we do not have much time to do a medical visit, we can do it online with a doctor.
People
 in the past doesn't have
such
 a facility and the moderation in their life as now. On the one hand, there are lots of fast food and unhealthy eating habit. but
on the other hand
, the modern generations are more and more interesting in sports and fitness, which is virtually at home or in clubs. We are moving
also
 much more to vegan and healthy food styles.
This
also
 become a trend among
people
. In the modern generation, there is competition between
people
 to stay healthy, and beautiful and have a great appearance. In short,
people
 in the past do not have the ability and the facility to go and visit doctors like modern
people
. All disease
also
 have their own medication and remedy. A healthy food style become a trend and
people
 now are much more interesting in their appearance and the way they look.
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