Results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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coffee
and tea
consuming
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habits(
bought
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buying
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fresh
coffee
,instant
coffee
and
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to
cafe
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a cafe
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for
coffee
) in
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4 weeks in five Australian
cities
.
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,The
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of went to a cafe for
coffee
in
last
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4 weeks was the most popular in each
cities
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,whereas the amount of buying fresh
coffee
in
last
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4 weeks was
least
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popular in 5
cities
. The most popular
option
in 4 of 5
cities
was consuming
coffee
or tea from
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a cafe
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cafe
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cafes
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that
percent
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of city residents was around 60 to 65
percent
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in Sydney,Melbourne and Hobart ,while about 55% in Brisbane and just under 50% in Adelaide.
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was the most popular in each
cities
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except Adelaide. Bought instant
coffee
was more popular than Bought fresh
coffee
and most popular in
Adailaide
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Adelaide
.
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Hobart has just under 55%.
other
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two
cities
that have almost the same number are Brisbane ,
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residents
around
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45 - 49
percent
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. The
last
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is
bought
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fresh.The
option
was least popular in each city. Sydney and Melbourne have the almost same result around 43%.About 38% in Hobart .Brisbane and Adelaide have
lowest
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percentage just under 35%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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