These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved ?

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play a significant role in
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life, they
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support and teach people with the knowledge they have. But few and fewer people want to become
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This
problem is
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by many reasons and some of them will be discussed below with my own recommendations.
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, the workload is too heavy and the working time is
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long example: designing the
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and so on.
Consequently
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balance
between work and family is
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damaged. To deal with
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should increase the number of teaching assistants so they can help the main
teacher
get the job done. Another catalyst for
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problem is that
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, have to be faced
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only overloaded teaching schedules but
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responsibilities to orien teenagers
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. Since
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in
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age group
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to be rebellious and show little respect for their
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, to mitigate
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problem, it is important for the government to limit the burden of obligations on teachers, by appointing more
teacher
assistants and stipulating a maximum number of working hours per week. In short, the decrease in the number of people pursuing
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well as the attitude of students. The government needs immediate change to
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