‘Healthcare should always be funded by governments, and it should always be free for people to use.’ To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?

As the price of
healthcare
treatment
has increased rapidly, some people argue that
governments
should always be the major funders of the
healthcare
system and people should be provided with free
treatment
. As far as I am concerned, I highly agree with
this
viewpoint as human basic needs can be satisfied.
To begin
with, it is
government's
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duty to provide citizens with
healthcare
treatment
. As the health conditions of workers hold the key to productivity, labour supply may be impeded if society
does’t
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doesn't
have enough
treatment
.
For example
, employees may not be concentrated on their work if they are facing an expansive medicine fee from private hospitals.
Therefore
, prices can be reduced once
governments
support
healthcare
, which can
also
enhance productivity as well as social development.
On the other hand
, only basic
healthcare
treatment
should be free to the public. As lots of resources are being used to sustain
healthcare
services,
governments
may run out of budgets if they can not make any profit from it.
For example
, the government needs to employ
high-skills
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doctors and
purshases
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purchases
modern technologies to ensure a high-quality
treatment
.
Therefore
, charging the public
from
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high-standard cures can encourage
governments
to support the system in
an
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more efficient way. In conclusion, it is undeniable that
governments
should fund
healthcare
as it satisfies human basic needs.
Besides
,
although
governments
have
duty
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to prevent
citizen's
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citizens
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from high
medicen
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medicine
medical
fees, it is no doubt that the public should
also
take responsibility for social development.
Therefore
, only fundamental treatments should be free for people to use.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Universal healthcare
  • Commodified
  • Public health standards
  • Economic burden
  • Mixed healthcare system
  • Preventive healthcare
  • Efficiency
  • Quality of care
  • Fundamental human right
  • Government-funded
  • Private sector involvement
  • Healthcare services
  • Education in healthcare
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