In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, the major of people in the world enjoy

the

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wealthy and freedom life,

however

, there

are

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still some country live

in

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property

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. In

this

essay, I will briefly discuss some reasons and explain several useful solutions before the conclusion is reached.

First

of all, the main reason

of

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this

issue is the critical environmental

problem

.

Although

the technology in

this

recent year is very improved, it is not enough to protect crops from

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severe natural disaster.

In addition

,

the

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global warming and

the

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extreme weather usually destroy the regular pattern of

season

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the season

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, so lots of fruits and vegetables can not be harvested in time or even

dead

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before they mature.

Secondly

, despite the number of harvested crops is become more than

the

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past, the foods and resources

are still concentrate

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are still concentrated

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on

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by

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few

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people. If the gap between rich and poor

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continues

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continue

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widen, the

problem

of famine will still exacerbate. To overcome those difficult problems, we need to conquer the basic reason.

To begin

with, the public should put more

of

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an emphasis on the environmental

problem

.

For example

, the government should publish a policy to ban people

cutting

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from cutting

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down more trees and should plant more vegetation on the mountain to prevent critical

mudslide

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mudslides

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.

In addition

, the world should more focus on the progress of developing countries like Africa.

Moreover

, they can have

ability

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the ability

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to solve their famine and property

problem

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problems

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.

Also

,

authority

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authorities

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can encourage the community and companies to engage in a charity

activity

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to donate foods and resources to the developing nations. To sum up,

although

the

problem

of famine is still critical recently, we still have more methods to overcome

successfully

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. If the public can realize the significance of

this

issue, the world can become better and

peaceful

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more peaceful

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in the future.