You’ve just returned from a disastrous holiday! It was not as described by the agent and you experienced serious problems. Write a letter of complaint to the agent. In your letter - remind the agent about the holiday - explain to them what happened - ask for compensation

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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letter to show my immense dissatisfaction
about
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my
last
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horrible holiday trip to St. Cera towns 25 Km far from Miami Beach with booking reference number p13634511 and I require a full refund of my money. At the onset, I vividly remember you described to me
about
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this
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holiday offer on the 23rd of
last
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month and listed a lot of benefits
such
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as free dinner and city rides along with insurance. Because not a single benefit was available there, I had to spend
extra
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$450 to get avail stay and meal options. Honestly, being a regular customer, I have never expected
such
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false information from your side.
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, I want a full refund of my booking amount of $250 as I had paid all my expenses for
this
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trip at that place separately.
Hence
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, it would be sufficient for you to transfer the whole amount
till
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next
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Friday into my account lest a legal discourse should be followed by me against you for deceiving me with wrong information. I hope you would understand the genuinity of my situation and act
accordingly
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. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Harry Brown

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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