Some people say that school children should be given individual class work, while others think that working in small groups is better for them. Discuss both approaches and include your own opinion.

Over the
last
decade, some schools across the globe
are started
Change the verb form
have started
show examples
a
Correct article usage
the
show examples
concept of group
assignments
. Some parents and psychologists claim that individual class work yield better results compared to
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
Correct your spelling
teamwork
show examples
team work
Correct your spelling
teamwork
show examples
;
However
, in my
opinion
Add a comma
,opinion
show examples
working in small groups is more beneficial, in the following paragraphs, I will explore both views and provide
reason
Add an article
a reason
show examples
for my stance
at
Change preposition
on
show examples
the end. On the one hand, working individually without depending on peers improves
students
Change noun form
students'
student's
show examples
self-confidence and individuality. To commence with self-confidence, some children who accomplish
assignments
on their own without relying on other
classments
Correct your spelling
classmates
classes
tends
Correct subject-verb agreement
tend
show examples
to have higher trust
on
Change preposition
in
show examples
their capabilities.
As a result
, they will gain better confidence
on
Change preposition
in
show examples
their own strengths.
Besides
that
such
self activities
Add a hyphen
self-activities
show examples
leads
Correct subject-verb agreement
lead
show examples
to individuality as students realise they have good knowledge and wisdom to accomplish key projects in their curriculum and personal life.
For example
, these days many minors without any support
they
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
are competitive
to
Change preposition
with
show examples
their elder counterparts in all most all fields.
Thus
, youth tend to apply the same for their future
endevours
Correct your spelling
endeavours
.
On the other hand
, one cannot deny that
Correct your spelling
teamwork
show examples
team work
Correct your spelling
teamwork
show examples
provides greater social and
team
skills
.
To begin
with,
collabrating
Correct your spelling
collaborating
frequently with other students provides an opportunity to learn
culture
Add an article
the culture
show examples
and
traditional
Replace the word
traditions
show examples
from each other due to which one can learn new social and moral
skills
.
For instance
, youth who participate in group activities gain more moral and social
skills
and produce better
citizen
Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
show examples
which is
a
Change the article
apply
show examples
crucial for
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
society.
In addition
to social
skills
, frequently interacting with many
people
develops leadership
skills
and
team
skills
.
For example
, some
people
who
involved
Add a missing verb
are involved
show examples
in
team
sports
during
Change preposition
at
show examples
early age tend to develop
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
greater
team leading
Add a hyphen
team-leading
show examples
skills
and
Correct your spelling
adapt
show examples
adopt
Correct your spelling
adapt
show examples
to any workforce easily.
Finally
, to
recaptiulate
Correct your spelling
recapitulate
, some
people
believe that self
assignments
yield better grades
compare
Wrong verb form
compared
show examples
to group
assignments
. In my opinion, in
this
society
Add a comma
,society
show examples
human beings
haveto
Correct your spelling
have to
be live with diversified communities so it is vital to start collaborating
Change preposition
at in
show examples
in
Correct your spelling
an
show examples
early age with different
people
that
makes
Change the verb form
make
show examples
better citizens tomorrow.
Submitted by rana on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: