Some people say that school children should be given individual class work, while others think that working in small groups is better for them. Discuss both approaches and include your own opinion.
Over the
last
decade, some schools across the globe are started
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have started
a
concept of group Correct article usage
the
assignments
. Some parents and psychologists claim that individual class work yield better results compared to the
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apply
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teamwork
team work
; Correct your spelling
teamwork
However
, in my opinion
working in small groups is more beneficial, in the following paragraphs, I will explore both views and provide Add a comma
,opinion
reason
for my stance Add an article
a reason
at
the end.
On the one hand, working individually without depending on peers improves Change preposition
on
students
self-confidence and individuality. To commence with self-confidence, some children who accomplish Change noun form
students'
student's
assignments
on their own without relying on other classments
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classmates
classes
tends
to have higher trust Correct subject-verb agreement
tend
on
their capabilities. Change preposition
in
As a result
, they will gain better confidence on
their own strengths. Change preposition
in
Besides
that such
self activities
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self-activities
leads
to individuality as students realise they have good knowledge and wisdom to accomplish key projects in their curriculum and personal life. Correct subject-verb agreement
lead
For example
, these days many minors without any support they
are competitive Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
their elder counterparts in all most all fields. Change preposition
with
Thus
, youth tend to apply the same for their future endevours
.
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endeavours
On the other hand
, one cannot deny that Correct your spelling
teamwork
team work
provides greater social and Correct your spelling
teamwork
team
skills
. To begin
with, collabrating
frequently with other students provides an opportunity to learn Correct your spelling
collaborating
culture
and Add an article
the culture
traditional
from each other due to which one can learn new social and moral Replace the word
traditions
skills
. For instance
, youth who participate in group activities gain more moral and social skills
and produce better citizen
which is Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
a
crucial for Change the article
apply
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
to social skills
, frequently interacting with many people
develops leadership skills
and team
skills
. For example
, some people
who involved
in Add a missing verb
are involved
team
sports during
early age tend to develop Change preposition
at
a
greater Correct article usage
apply
team leading
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team-leading
skills
and Correct your spelling
adapt
adopt
to any workforce easily.
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adapt
Finally
, to recaptiulate
, some Correct your spelling
recapitulate
people
believe that self assignments
yield better grades compare
to group Wrong verb form
compared
assignments
. In my opinion, in this
society
human beings Add a comma
,society
haveto
be live with diversified communities so it is vital to start collaborating Correct your spelling
have to
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at in
in
early age with different Correct your spelling
an
people
that makes
better citizens tomorrow.Change the verb form
make
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