Your child is going on a three-day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why would you like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip
Hello Mr.Smith,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to express my interest in accompanying the school
trip
to the USA as a parent volunteer.
My child, Aroohi, is particularly excited about Use synonyms
this
opportunity and I believe that my presence would not only provide reassurance to her but Linking Words
also
allow me to offer my valuable support to other children during the Linking Words
trip
.
I would be happy to assist in any way needed during the Use synonyms
trip
. I have a background in organizing events, so I could help supervise the group, making sure the children are Use synonyms
well-cordinated
and safe. Correct your spelling
well-coordinated
Additionally
, I am familiar with the USA, having visited several times and could assist with any local arrangements or handle any unexpected issues that may arise.
Could you please provide more information about the specifics Linking Words
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of
trip
? I would be interested to know about the planned activities, accommodation details and the general responsibilities of parent volunteers. It would Use synonyms
also
be helpful to understand if there are any particular health or safety guidelines we may need to follow.
Thank you for considering my request. I am enthusiastic about the chance to participate and contribute and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
JaibeerLinking Words
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure smoother transitions between ideas for better flow.
Task Achievement
Consider adding a personal touch, perhaps a brief anecdote about Aroohi’s excitement for the trip.
Task Achievement
The letter has a clear purpose and a polite tone, which is very appropriate for the context.
Coherence and Cohesion
The structure is logical, with clear paragraphs for each main idea.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite