Your child is going on a three-day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why would you like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip

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Hello Mr.Smith, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to express my interest in accompanying the school
trip
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to the USA as a parent volunteer. My child, Aroohi, is particularly excited about
this
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opportunity and I believe that my presence would not only provide reassurance to her but
also
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allow me to offer my valuable support to other children during the
trip
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. I would be happy to assist in any way needed during the
trip
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. I have a background in organizing events, so I could help supervise the group, making sure the children are
well-cordinated
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well-coordinated
and safe.
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, I am familiar with the USA, having visited several times and could assist with any local arrangements or handle any unexpected issues that may arise. Could you please provide more information about the specifics
on
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of
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the
trip
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? I would be interested to know about the planned activities, accommodation details and the general responsibilities of parent volunteers. It would
also
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be helpful to understand if there are any particular health or safety guidelines we may need to follow. Thank you for considering my request. I am enthusiastic about the chance to participate and contribute and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Jaibeer

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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure smoother transitions between ideas for better flow.
Task Achievement
Consider adding a personal touch, perhaps a brief anecdote about Aroohi’s excitement for the trip.
Task Achievement
The letter has a clear purpose and a polite tone, which is very appropriate for the context.
Coherence and Cohesion
The structure is logical, with clear paragraphs for each main idea.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enthusiastic
  • Chaperone
  • Itinerary
  • Accommodations
  • Logistics
  • Overseeing
  • Cultural exchange
  • Assist
  • Supervise
  • Engage
  • Responsibilities
  • Bilingual
  • First aid certified
  • Emergency protocols
  • Team-building activities
  • Communication skills
  • Safety measures
  • Childcare experience
  • Transport arrangements
  • Educational objectives
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