IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country.Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
It is considered by some
people
Use synonyms
 that learning a foreign
language
Use synonyms
 is only for travelling or working in a foreign
country
Use synonyms
 while others think that there are
also
Linking Words
 other
reasons
Use synonyms
 why someone should learn a foreign
language
Use synonyms
.In my opinion,
although
Linking Words
 travelling and working are the main
reasons
Use synonyms
,there are
also
Linking Words
 other important
reasons
Use synonyms
 like studying and making friends from other countries.
Firstly
Linking Words
,nowadays
people
Use synonyms
 tour globally for various
reasons
Use synonyms
.Without knowing that
country
Use synonyms
's
language
Use synonyms
,there will be difficult to read the sign boards,directions and many other problems.
In other words
Linking Words
,if you want to buy something for travelling memory or to go to many places within a short period,it will be hard even if you are with a tour guide or dictionary.if it is an unlucky day,you will probably waste the whole day going to just a place by going in the wrong direction. Another one is working in a foreign
country
Use synonyms
.Working need to communicate not only with the
people
Use synonyms
 who are working together with you but
also
Linking Words
 with the customers and bosses.
This
Linking Words
 means that without knowing their
language
Use synonyms
,there will be very hard not just in the work but from the start,the interview.
On the other hand
Linking Words
,studying
also
Linking Words
 plays an important role in learning a foreign
language
Use synonyms
.Not only studying in aboard but
also
Linking Words
 studying by
books
Use synonyms
 need foreign
languages
Use synonyms
.Many
books
Use synonyms
 may be written in a global
language
Use synonyms
 but there are still many
books
Use synonyms
 which are written in writers' mother
languages
Use synonyms
.
For example
Linking Words
,if you want to study the history of a
country
Use synonyms
,you have to read many history
books
Use synonyms
 about that
country
Use synonyms
 which are written in different
languages
Use synonyms
 by different writers.
In addition
Linking Words
,as time pass, technology becomes more and more advanced.Nowadays many
people
Use synonyms
 are using online as a daily habit including making new friends through online software.
This
Linking Words
 means that the more foreign
languages
Use synonyms
 you know,the more friends from different countries you can make. To sum up,having more
reasons
Use synonyms
 to learn means there is a higher chance to learn .Knowing more
languages
Use synonyms
 is surely useful in many ways.
People
Use synonyms
 should have many
reasons
Use synonyms
 to learn a foreign
language
Use synonyms
 and use it in many ways as they like.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
What to do next:
Look at other essays: