Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is thought by some corporate

organization

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organizations

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that sponsoring

sports

can be an avenue to promote their businesses. A good

number

of people are of the opinion that it is advantageous while others think the outcome

in the long run

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, in the long run,

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is not favourable.

This

essay will discuss the media publicity and profits

companies

will gain but why it can eventually be financially disadvantageous.

First

of all , most business that

patronize

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patronizes

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sports

engage in it for brand awareness and publicity in the

market place

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marketplace

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, considering the fact that games and sporting events

is

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are

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loved by

lot

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a lot

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of people it

command

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commands

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a good

number

of fans , advertising

of

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apply

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products and services will create good

sales

and visibility.

For example

,

companies

like Pepsi, Adidas and Nike

has

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recorded

huge

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a huge

the huge

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number

of

sales

via advertisements.

Furthermore

, great business relationships have

being

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built and access to

wider

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a wider

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number of

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apply

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audience

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audiences

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thereby increasing their

sales

.

On the other hand

, sponsorship from

companies

can give them the opportunity to manipulate the sporting events which damages the essence of competition.

Secondly

, the huge amount of finance involves in patronizing

the

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athletics is quite worrisome and can adversely affect the organizations involved.

Finally

, due to reliance on the sponsor, some

companies

may give a bad image to the sport.

For instance

,

of

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if

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a

fast food

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fast-food

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selling establishment is sponsoring the sport , people can begin to link watching sport to unhealthy eating habits. In conclusion, despite the obvious cons of

business

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businesses

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advertising their goods via

sports

sponsorship,the great contributions cannot be denied.

This

essay discusses the advantages of greater visibility and good

sales

turnout on the part of the firms while

also

mentioning the drawbacks regarding the

sports

brand image and manipulation of events .Personally, I think it is good for establishments to sponsor sporting activities.