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Some government say how many children a family can have in their country. they may control the number of children someone has through taxes it is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. do you agree or disagree?

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The bar graph depicts how
noise
 pollution from traffic, trains, aircraft and industries has affected the
people
 of Europe in urban and rural
areas
 during the
day
 and at
night
 in the year 2007. Overall,
although
, both the
areas
 were struggling with
noise
, the
cities
 were noisier in comparison to the villages. While
,
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 the maximum number of
people
 were disturbed due to traffic
noises
, the least
noise
 pollution was made by industries.
Nevertheless
, at
night
 lesser
noises
 have been recorded in
cities
 and rural
areas
. Almost 64
million
 and 48
million
people
 were affected by the
noise
 made by vehicles in the
cities
 during the
day
 and at
night
 respectively.
However
, half amount of
the
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people
were
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 affected in the rural
areas
.
Noises
 from trains were far lesser than traffic
noises
. In the
cities
, 10
million
people
 were disturbed by train
noises
 during the
day
 and 8
million
 at
night
. Whereas, in the countryside, the figure dropped by 2
million
 respectively at both times.
Noises
 made by aeroplanes have affected twice more
people
 in the
cities
 during the
day
,
however
, at
night
 the same amount of
people
was
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 affected by the
noises
(with 1
million
 respectively).
Nevertheless
, due to the non-establishment of industries in the countryside, no one was affected by the industrial
noises
, whereas in the urban centres around 1
million
people
 were disturbed during the
day
 while at
night
 25% of
people
 were disturbed.
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