You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in New Zealand. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

Dear jass, How are you? I hope everything is going well and you're in good health. I'm writing to let you know regarding my file which I was left in your home with significant information and I am really thankful to you I enjoyed it when I stayed at your home during my business seminar in New Zealand . I never forget those days thanks again but, now the most notable thing is that I need my file which is very vital for me because next month I am taking a plane to visit my home country so I want my file.

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, I give you some hints like where it is and what it looks like so that you can get it easily, without any confusion. When you enter the room where I stayed on the left-hand side of one of the drawers you will see one red file on top of it . Apart from that, when you open it you will see some important documents like a passport, driving licence, few other documents it is not only crucial for me but

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necessary papers as you know without them I can't do anything and travel. could you please send it to me back via Canada Post so that I get it as soon as possible you know my address if you need any help regarding my information please contact me . looking forward to seeing you. take care of yourself. your friend jass

jassidhu5920

May 28, 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to clearly separate your paragraphs for better reading.

task response

Try to use simpler sentences to make your ideas clearer.

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Add more specific details about the documents to make it easier for your friend to identify the file.

positive

You expressed your gratitude well and shared your nice memories.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

246 words

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gratitude
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registered post
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