Technology has more positive than negative effects on our relationships with other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In
this
tech-savvy modern world, without any doubt innovation of
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technology
is one of the reason
for the present globalization that connects Change to a plural noun
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people
accross
the world. Some human activists and psychologists claim that Correct your spelling
across
technology
has more benefits than drawbacks on
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however
, I completely disagree with this
statement as the evolution of machines made some citizens to
spend more time on devices than Change the verb form
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people
.
To commence with, one cannot deny that current
generation is addicted to the smartphone and Correct article usage
the current
internet
, they can live without family or friends but not without gadgets. To explain Correct article usage
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further
, earlier
days, friends and families were spending their quality evenings Change preposition
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with
interacting with each other, unlike now, more Change preposition
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people
are addicted to their devices. For example
, as per the recent survey conducted by the Child Welfare Community, India, families eating dinner together is
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apply
last
sem-decade. In addition
to this
, children are addicted to video games which make them robots, they do not develop social and moral skills as they not
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do not
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participate
activitis
with neighbours.
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activities
In addition
to addiction to technology
, telecommuting and E-commerce are other two technologies that diminishing
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diminish
human
touch. Correct article usage
the human
To begin
with E-commerce, this
platform provides a
greater convenience for folks to buy products from anywhere due to which these customers lose a chance to interact with shopkeepers or store owners. Remove the article
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to E-commerace
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commerce
enaled
an option to work from anywhere which Correct your spelling
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people
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the workplace
collegues
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tend
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For instance
, in ancient times, everyone has to step out from
their house for shopping or for work but now Change preposition
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technology
has elimnating
human interactions.
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eliminating
Finally
, to recapitulate, machines are greater innovation for human beings, but in my opinion,with respect to relationships
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people
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