There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am just writing to let you know that

a rumour news

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rumour news

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has been spreading among the

park

users about

selling

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the selling

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of the property. Myself James Joseph living in Skyline apartment door no 32C and a working professional in a hotel named Radisson blue. The

park

is so important because it attracts very rare species of creatures like birds, butterflies and loving parrots due to the pleasant atmosphere.

Also

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the

park

is known

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protecting the 1000 years old palm tree which is getting to extinction and the negligence of coming new management will cause deforestation with the list of

priority

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listed by the new buyers.

Moreover

, the

park

gives plenty of spaces available for jogging and with attracting new people to use the

park

daily. I would like to bring your kind attention that

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public awareness and protest will take place

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if the council does not forfeit the selling plan.

Furthermore

, from the day of selling and the regaining back the

park

to the public, people will get

in to

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a breakdown of all services in the area until the dropdown plan by the council. I look forward to

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from you soon Yours faithfully, James Joseph.

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There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

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Nowadays, most countries improve the standard of living through economic development. But some social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of the phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages?

Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connection between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?