some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that competitive skill should be taught to

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, others opine that co-operative skill is better than being competitive for their

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. In my opinion,

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should be taught to participate in groups is better for their adult life. In

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statement. On one hand, in the world, competition is everywhere, in all sectors

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, as jobs or in business. Different types of competitions are held in schools for learning purposes and

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encourage

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to participate in them.

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, these activities

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help offspring to master particular

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they can adapt their

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for their earning source.

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, some

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have

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in singing and drawing, and participating in drawing and music activities encourages

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to do their best for other

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. It is possible that they are always encouraged to improve their

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to help them build a

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career as an artist.

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, working as a part of a

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member is always useful in life, while working in a

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teach the importance of coordination skill to

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activity encouraged juveniles to do their best being member of groups, it

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add cooperative

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to them.

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, In many schools,

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have to do

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projects, and that type of activity helps them to build cooperation nature with other

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. In the

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, they will contribute to society through their cooperative nature, which is beneficial for themselves as well as society. In conclusion, being a competitive person is important in

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highly competitive world,

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, working in a

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is better than being a competitive player. In my opinion, both are useful

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for

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's

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, using these

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they learn to contribute to society will lead to a better

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for people.