Government should spend money on railway rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement

Nowadays, authorities are upgrading and building new infrastructures to keep up with the need

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transportation. Some people hold the strong opinion that government should utilize their resources on railways

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of roads while others may have different opinions. I

am completely agree

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with the idea and would like to discuss some important

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for me to do so in

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essay. The most compelling reason for me to have

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idea is to be

environmental

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reason. Trucks and Lorries produce thousands of carbon dioxide that are harmful to the environment while trains can perform the same jobs with better efficiency and so on. Nowadays, even trains have better fuel efficiency and governments should invest in railroad interlinking between cities. Another strong reason for my point of view is that trains perform dual tasks

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as carrying livestock and passengers

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the same route. By investing

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rail roads

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railroads

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, they may even have better comfortability for passengers and carry more livestock than a lorry could ever do at the same time.

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but not least, when people have more

transport

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options in and out of the cities, they may even ditch their cars and use the public form of

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. It will be

cost-efficient

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option

consider

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finding

parking

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place ,toll

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and rising fuel costs. In conclusion, I am agreed with the fact that governing bodies should spend their budget on

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because it is environmentally friendly,

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efficient mode of

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and

cost effective

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mode for passengers. All things considered, I would like to suggest that government should start launching campaigns

education

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public

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and

business

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to consider railways as

important

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form of public

transport

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