“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree?

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For any disease, it demands a considerable effort to analyze and cure. Considering the energy and resource
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spent on curing an ailment, it is always argued that it would be better to take steps to prevent it.
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essay agrees fully with
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argument considering the amount of
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and
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one spends on the ailment. Since, in recent years, through several research publications, it is evident that the
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and
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requires preventing disease is negligible when compared to the spending that illness requires for curing. Primarily, treating the diseases requires a humungous chunk of wealth without a guarantee of the result.
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hits hardly not only for the poor people to lose their life-long savings on medicines and procedures but
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it has significantly affected more affluent families.
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, one of my relatives was diagnosed with terminal cancer and the family had to spend all their funds in hope of saving him but in vain,
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has affected the educational support that they could currently provide to his children. The
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main reason would be the amount of
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spent on travel and for medical procedures. Though the patients are forced to occupy their
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with treatments, most of the
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it will be
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-consuming activity for persons accompanying the affected ones even if they are doing it out of their love towards them. For my relative, it was his daughter who spent her days with him for his diagnosis and treatment without being able to be on her job for almost a year. To conclude, it looks to be an ideal decision to spend our
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and
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on activities and practises that will prevent the disease from occurring
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of being ignorant and spending more amount of
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and
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after one gets ill.
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