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Computers today can quickly and accurately translate languages, therefore, it is a waste of time to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that computers have significantly changed the way people learn languages in daily life.Some individuals believe that translating dialects can be convenient ,
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 others argue that learn a foreign language is a waste of
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 essay will explore both viewpoints by supporting relevant examples and insights.
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 with, a key factor is that computers play a crucial role in modern society.
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 is because it allows residents to translate dialects rapidly by using different programs.
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, many students in Omani schools depend on tablets in learning the English language. To illustrate, if we want to translate the word, we will use Google translator where easy and flexible. A recent study conducted at the University of Nizwa shows that approximately 50% of young people who study English lessons achieve a high goal to speak with a foreign accent.
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, there is no doubt that learn a new language is a
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 era. To demonstrate, platforms have shown several resources by using any
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, my little son connects with his friend through Zoom meetings , and most of the
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 French is not easy to learn.
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 way has outcomes, which are not limited to residents only but
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 have a profound impact on the community. In conclusion,
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 both views have valid points, I believe that allowing computers to learn new languages is the most practical approach, as it benefits individuals and society as a whole.

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task response
Be clear on your view at the start. Say if you agree or disagree and keep that idea.
structure
Make a plan. A short intro, three body paragraphs with one idea each, and a brief end.
coherence
Link the ideas and examples with simple words like also, because, for example, and show how one idea leads to the next.
language
Use only easy words. Fix big grammar mistakes and keep sentences short.
examples
Choose one good example per idea and show how it fits the point.
structure
There is a clear plan with intro, body, and end.
content
Some real life examples are used from school and life.
argument
The end gives a view.
Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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