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Some people think that there will be a complete ban on all forms of advertising. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advertising plays a pivotal role in increasing the sales of a product. Whether it is a pencil or a piece of jewellery everything is being advertised nowadays and it helps a firm to generate revenue. There are many
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 who perceive that all types of
advertisements
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 should be banned. I, completely disagree with the statement because it will not only affect the advertising industry in terms of money but
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 affect
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 by banning educational adverts. To embark with, prohibiting the advertising will definitely impact the revenue generation of the firms.
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, in today's era, most firms are dependent on advertising for the sale of their products and banning it, will cause a disruption in the flow of income.
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, a report published in the London Times has shown that companies are earning 60% of their profits from online advertising.
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 will not only harm the industries but
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 the National Income of every economy.
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, we cannot neglect the adverts that are associated with educational backgrounds. To be more specific,
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 tend to learn from many adverts which are usually helping them in their life.
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, saying no to tobacco is an advertisement that has helped many
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 get rid of their addiction.
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, these kinds of ads usually make
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 aware of the consequences of
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 products and help them to choose a wiser option to live a healthy life. In conclusion, It would be a wrong decision to ban all kinds of
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. It would be great if the government only forbid obscene
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 to be telecasted and would pay more attention to providing educational messages. I, strongly recommend, that
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 should not be prohibited
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 firms should focus on making
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 more meaningful.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ban
  • advertising
  • information dissemination
  • economic growth
  • freedom of speech
  • misleading
  • consumerism
  • materialism
  • vulnerable populations
  • regulations
  • privacy concerns
  • cultural homogenization
  • media literacy
  • targeted ads
  • sustainable lifestyles
  • ethics codes
  • purchasing decisions
  • competition
  • innovation
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