Governments should spend tax money on public libraries rather than public transportation improvements. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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standard
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standards
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be
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are
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stipend on citizen libraries rather than improving local buses and trains.In my opinion,Correct article usage
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transport
system is imperative as it Add an article
the transport
connect
people all over the world Change the verb form
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a slight
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an
this
system can cause big havoc all over the world.Linking Words
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especially
with technology will reduce private vehicles Add the comma(s)
,especially
such
that there will be less pollution and money will be saved which can be focused on other priorities.Linking Words
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research done by the University of Nairobi depicts that 80% of Correct article usage
apply
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transport system.Add a hyphen
up-to-date
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state
has a Add an article
the state
responsibilty
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responsibility
benefit
each and every member of the society and Change the verb form
benefits
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consider
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such
that people do not Linking Words
necessarly
need to visit a library for Correct your spelling
necessarily
a certain information
.Remove the article
certain information
a piece of certain information
Furthermore
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rule
and Fix the agreement mistake
rules
regulation
in the library Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
such
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For example
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the
universities are downloading books and reading journals online.Correct article usage
apply
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with
other alternative
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online systems.
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as
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public libraries and transport are made for locals,nowadays information can be accessed online so the executive should spend more money Linking Words
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the travel.Change preposition
on
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