Both governments and individuals are spending vast amount of money on protecting animals and their habitat. This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and health care. To what extent do you agree?

Many environmental activists combat the extinction of endangered species and their
habitat
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. To achieve
this
some governments and citizens
donates
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large
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a large
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amount of their income for environmental conservation,
on the contrary
, some
people
argue that funds
has
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to be shifted to provide basic necessities
such
as
poverty
and
health
care. In my opinion, I agree that
poverty
and
health
issues are major concerns in current society compared to other issues. To commence with, one cannot deny that many rural places across the globe do not have access to basic
heath
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health
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care systems. Due to
which
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this
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many
people
take their
last
breath in
transportion
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transportation
when commuting to hospital. To illustrate,
as per
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apply
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a recent survey conducted by the World
Health
Organisation states that
atleast
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at least
one patient dies every hour on transit to
hospital
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the hospital
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due to
lack
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a lack
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of multi-speciality hospitals. To help,
Poliymakers
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Policymakers
and communities could work together to develop proper
infrastucture
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infrastructure
by building hospitals, constructing roads to medical camps, and emergency ambulances.
As a result
, that saves a lot of lives every day.
In addition
to medical services,
other
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major concern is
poverty
in many countries. Due to
poverty
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,poverty
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people
commit crimes as they need to feed
thier
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their
familes
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families
and live
basic
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life. To explain
further
, Due to
increased
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cost of leaving
low wage
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workers income is not sufficient for their daily needs due to which they tend to commit crimes to support their dependents.
In addition
to crimes, many
asian
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Asian
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countries do not offer free education that impacts poor folks as it is not in
a
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afforadable
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affordable
budget range.
For example
, school studies in Srilanka
is
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are
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very expensive due to which
poverty
people
not
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do not
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go to school that increase
illetarates
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illiterates
illustrates
in
country
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the country
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.
Finally
, to recapitulate, undoubtedly, the extinction of species is a global issue. I suggest authorities and
people
to
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contribute money to major issues like
poverty
and
health
due to the aforementioned reasons.
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