Some people believe that governments are spending more money on wild life. This money should be used for other works. Do you agree or disagree?

Dear Sir or Madam I've read your article about the
town
centres
in my country, there are some things I'd like to argue about. Not all the
town
centres
in my country are the same.
Although
, the purpose of building a
city
centre
to
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is to
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exhibit the best part of the
city
and to make the resident's life more convenient.
Therefore
, the
town
centres
between cities have many similarities,
such
as luxury clothing shops and many convenience stores.
However
, there are some cities that are determined to build unique
town
centres
.
For example
, the
city
centre
in Beijing is unmatched. It is designed
next
to the forbidden
city
and mixed with all the historic sites to create an unprecedented atmosphere. It's worth mentioning that the Olympic matches in 2008 made Beijing's
city
centre
even more special. So as to impress the foreign visitors, the government built a matchless national stadium. Now,
this
stadium has become a symbol of the
city
.
Second
, the
town
centre
in Shanghai is unique as well. I have been there once, and it was highly impressive. The
city
centre
is designed
next
to the most iconic landmark of Shanghai - Oriental Pearl Tower. In conclusion, not all the
town
centres
in my country are the same.
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