You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Write a letter to one of your friends. In your letter: ask them for help finding accommodation tell them where you would like to live tell them the type of place you are looking for
Hey, Jane! It's been
long
time since have spoken Add an article
a long
last
, I hope you guys are doing well and everybody in the family healthy
. Due to Add a missing verb
is healthy
Correct article usage
the pandemic
pandemic
there has been so much time, Add a comma
,pandemic
Replace the word
thank
thanks
God Add the preposition
tothanks
its
all better now. I have Replace the word
it's
it is
wonderfull
news, Correct your spelling
wonderful
me
and Alex with our son are moving to Hamilton in a month.
I hope that it is not too much if I ask for some help from you. We have found several places online for Change the pronoun
I
a
rent, but it would be really great if you or Josh could help us Remove the article
apply
to
actually take a look at them in person and see if everything is as good with Change preposition
apply
appartments
as it says in Correct your spelling
apartments
advertisments
. You could go there and call us on video so we get to talk to landlords as well and see if we like the Correct your spelling
advertisements
place
,
and make an agreement on prepay. That way we could move to the Remove the comma
apply
place
right away when we come to Hamilton.
Maybe you could also
ask if anyone you know is givin
a Correct your spelling
given
giving
place
for a
rent, or maybe see some more ads online. We are looking for a Remove the article
apply
place
on the mountain, close to schools, playgrounds
, Correct word choice
and playgrounds
cause
Fedor is starting preschool Correct word choice
because
this
year, and obviously
public transport matters as well, because we don't have a car yet. Add a comma
,obviously
Two bedroom
Add a hyphen
Two-bedroom
appartment
, and not the basement in good condition, if possible furnished and if there is a parking spot - that would be good for the future.
We are coming to Canada on the 18th of July at 4pm, to Toronto Pearson Airport, we will take Correct your spelling
apartment
the
cab and probably will get to Hamilton by 7pm. By that time we should already have an Correct article usage
a
appartment
rented, so we can move in.
I am so Correct your spelling
apartment
greatfull
to you in advance for helping in our complicated situation, I hope one day I can pay you back with as great help as you are giving to us.
Can't wait to Correct your spelling
grateful
hearing
from you and see you soon,
Yours, KaterinaChange the verb form
hear
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.