Some companies sponsor sports and sport stars as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today’s materialistic
world
, people are becoming more interested in clothing brands, exotic foods and other commodities unlike they were in the past.
Therefore
, in order to attract people’s attention to their products, companies are competitively providing sponsorship to famous athletes and
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teams. Some people argue that it is a good trend for both businesses and
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while others are still
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this
notion. Personally, I believe that the advantages of sponsorship for
sport
event outweigh its disadvantages. It is undoubtedly true that
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events
such
as
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and FIFA
World
Cup are widely watched around the
world
.
Thus
, companies start providing a large amount of
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to
such
events as well as athletes involved in order to get
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vast publicity.
For example
, if a renowned
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star endorses a certain type of brand, that product will instantly be noticed among worldwide fans. In fact,
this
practice will obviously bring benefits
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company and its
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rate will
also
rise.
Moreover
, it can bring
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benefits to the athletes as well. If a player from
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background with uncovered
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skills is sponsored by a prestigious company, he will be successful, having a chance to show his athletic abilities to the
world
. For these reasons,
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is advantageous for both domains, companies and sportspersons.
However
, the drawbacks related to
this
practice are
also
important to take into account.
Firstly
, some products are harmful to health. Take ‘Pepsi’ as an example,
this
company widely sponsors different types of
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competitions and players.
As a result
,
this
can lead to massive consumerism among
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lovers which can damage their health.
Secondly
, the reputation of a brand highly depends on who promotes it, which mean if the
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star does drugs or misbehave, the fans will be upset and stop using what he or she advertises. It can,
therefore
, result in the downturn of the brand. In conclusion, despite
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having detrimental effects on sportsperson and the audiences, I do believe that sponsorship always
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crucial role in helping
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events and
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stars survive in the industry.
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