A company has asked your local council to open a factory in the area where you live. You and your neighbours feel that this is not a great idea. write a letter to the local council. In your letter, you should: • state what problems this might cause • explain how it will affect you and others • suggest what you want the council to do.

Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing to you regarding the idea of opening a factory in our neighbourhood, in Hamilton. Thank you for being loyal to us at all times, but

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topic is too important for us not to involve in.

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as a community of

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apply

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many families strongly believe that building a plant might cause tremendous changes in the climate. It will definitely cause air pollution and we do not want our children

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to

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suffer from something like that. We had to put so much effort

in

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into

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creating

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green district, that it would be a shame to spoil it.

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of

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place that

factory

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the factory

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is planning to take is not too far from school and it would be against every possible rule to somewhat like that gdjkhksjjsj

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shells

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kl;

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; hskljlsko;

kso

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