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Write a letter to a newspaper editor about the poor condition of a historic building in your area. In the letter you should What building are you writing about? Describe the current condition of the building What should be done in this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam My name is Ekaterina Shadenkova and I would like to ask for your help in covering the story about the situation that has been going on in our local area, in Antalya, Kepez Karshiaka district. There is an old building that causes a lot of trouble for people who live nearby. It's at 3839 Sokak street, building 8. As I said before there is a house
that is
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 located beside our home, it is damaged and it's very old, not a single person lives there, but the cats and dogs. It is damaged from the roof to the bottom and it's made out of wood. It has only one floor and a small backyard with a lot of cardboard on it. There were several cases of fire that have been in that building, probably caused by heat or from thrown cigarettes close by. I think that city's government should read about
this
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 building in your newspaper.So your article should make an effect and they would
finally
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 demolish it. I hope that you would consider writing about
this
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 story and bring attention to those who are in charge. Best regards, Ekaterina Shadenkova.

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