People spend too much time on the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

When I was a child we did not have
internet
or even a computer, but nowadays it is a common thing to have at home and family tend to spend their day online most of the days. We
use
to go outside to play with other kids, and as for adults they
use
to communicate in person a lot more often than today.
Internet
is used too much these days to my consideration and we do not have
time
for regular things as we
use
to do before. There are a lot of people still spending
time
in nature doing sports and hiking, but most of them it is still supported by things they need to do online. On the other ,side
internet
gives so many opportunities to one another
such
as working online, shopping, and studying online. I am an online student too, I take a course in UX/UI design and it has been a great deal to do it online, because of the shortage of
time
. I do not have to go anywhere and I safe
time
to spend with my child and husband. We work online, we watch movies online, and we play games there too. A lot of people with disabilities get to have a good job distantly because they can
use
the
internet
. I would say that people do spend too much
time
online, but there is a huge profit from it. A person should take into consideration having a balance in spending
time
offline as well and
then
it will be a good life balance even with using
computer
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internet
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • excessive
  • negatively affects
  • physical and mental health
  • decreased productivity
  • hinders personal growth
  • internet addiction
  • essential
  • numerous benefits
  • productive
  • educational
  • wisely
  • individual choice
  • responsibility
  • manage
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