Some feel government rather than private companies should be in charge of medical services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As it is globally known that

health

is wealth. It is argued by some set of individuals that

health

services

should be handled by the

government

rather than private ownership companies. I strongly agree with

this

notion which will be discussed better in

this

essay. Moreso,

this

is because

government

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the government

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always provide free medical

services

to

citizenry

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the citizenry

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and high salary provision to

workers

.

To begin

with, governments are in the best position to provide medical

services

to people. To simplify

this

, free

health

services

are very pivotal to humanity and these are received from the

government

to the citizens, which are done with ease by them.

For instance

, 90% of pregnant women received free delivery

services

in 2011, which was authorized by the

government

.

Therefore

, it make

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easier for pregnant women that year whereby no bills were paid

by

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them.

Furthermore

,

high

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salary is a great way of motivation which are paid by the federal to their

workers

in order to function effectively. To make

this

more clearer, most of the private companies

workers

are

under-paid

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and

this

makes them

to

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be

reluntant

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reluctant

to carry out their duty perfectly. To illustrate

this

, a study carried out in 2019 in a private hospital demonstrated that

health care

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workers

are under pressure and render poor medical

services

because they are underpaid by their

employer

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. It is recommended that the

government

should look into hospitals owned by individuals and ensure their

workers

are adequately paid. In conclusion, private organizations are not in the best position to provide adequate

health

services

to citizens because of

their

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low salary range

to

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their

workers

.

Additionally

, assistance

are

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mostly performed by governments which

make

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them superior.

Hence

, governments should be interested in private organizations for better

health

wellness.