More and more people are moving from rural areas to cities in search of a better life, but city life has its own problems. What are these problems? Suggest some solutions

Nowadays, communities are moving towards town from the village for the shake of a better life. But towns are filled with many crises before their coming which are unknown to the newcomers. Most of the municipalities of the world have a huge
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than rural areas. I will mention all these crises and will suggest several solutions in the
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paragraph. Among thousands of problems , the metropolis most mentionable is lacking career facilities. Every day there too
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comes a lot of population getting a work. So in ,capital there creates an artificial crisis in the work market and really it is not possible to make a vacant post now and
then
. As a ,result the new commer falls into a dilemma in life, what he desired to fulfil from the capital.
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, research shows that in Dhaka port, each day about 5000 public come here to seek jobs, where near about 25 million population are living here. As a
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result most of them don't manage a career and
finally
engage in many crimes.
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situation makes the environment of the place.
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, for any crowds, in ,
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there are huge traffic jams that lead life dull here.
In addition
, all the service sector is competitive in towns like education, treatment etc.
Finally
, the towns are very much familiar with the sound and air pollution. Now I would propose some solutions to solve
this
crisis.
Firstly
, we have to create appointment facilities in rural areas, so that village community become unwanted to come centre. To create an activity facility we have to set up a mill industry, and garments factory where we can provide jobs for them.
secondly
, to stop the town going tendency we can improve the lifestyle of the village. We should provide quality education, transportation, electricity and entertainment for the rural community.
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, We motivate them to be closer to everyone's roots. To conclude, Both the urban and rural areas are not a matter of living issues, but security and standard lifestyle are more pointed aspects. So we should ensure proper basic things in rural as a community want to stay there and stop urban wards flow.
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