‘Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough’ To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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said, "Failure is proof that desire was not strong enough to reach a submit". In my opinion, I did not agree with

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notion and I will explain my reason in the following paragraph. On the one hand,

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notion will speak out from elderly

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as teachers or parents. In my experience, I quite listen to

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notion from a teacher who does not prefer me.

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, She give a reason that want me to feel interested in her subject because I always failed her test throughout semesters. She is teaching arithmetic but I do not prefer

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subject and quite favourite social studies and history. I have a bad attitude toward

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statement because somebody blames other

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for their own happiness. It has a lot of factors to failure.

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cannot be experts in every field.

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have interested in each field different from other

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, Teachers could not force all students to prefer and get a high score in maths subjects because students have various experts.

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, a Teacher can help them achieve basic knowledge of your subject and if students feel interested, they will study in future.

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, Everybody wants to succeed and not wish to fail.

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, I study and practice IELTS for 3 years. If I cannot achieve a wished band, It is normal that I will be sorrowful even if I am tired enough to reach a band.

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, I had found a lot of unpredictable accidents when significant moments

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as I came to the test late because rainfall fell on cats and dogs in the morning. Sometimes I feel life must be related to fortune more or less. In conclusion, I disagree with

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statement should not speak to any person because it makes them feel depressed more than

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time. Everybody wishes to achieve a goal so giving finger-crossed is the best way in society.

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A cafe near your home puts some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you. Write a letter to the cafe manager to complain about this matter. In your letter describe the problem; explain how it affects you; say what you will do if this matter is not resolved.