‘Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough’ To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some
people
said, "Failure is proof that desire was not strong enough to reach a submit". In my opinion, I did not agree with
this
notion and I will explain my reason in the following paragraph. On the one hand,
This
notion will speak out from elderly
people
such
as teachers or parents. In my experience, I quite listen to
this
notion from a teacher who does not prefer me.
However
, She give a reason that want me to feel interested in her subject because I always failed her test throughout semesters. She is teaching arithmetic but I do not prefer
this
subject and quite favourite social studies and history. I have a bad attitude toward
this
statement because somebody blames other
people
for their own happiness. It has a lot of factors to failure.
Firstly
,
People
cannot be experts in every field.
Secondly
,
People
have interested in each field different from other
people
.
For example
, Teachers could not force all students to prefer and get a high score in maths subjects because students have various experts.
However
, a Teacher can help them achieve basic knowledge of your subject and if students feel interested, they will study in future.
On the other hand
, Everybody wants to succeed and not wish to fail.
For example
, I study and practice IELTS for 3 years. If I cannot achieve a wished band, It is normal that I will be sorrowful even if I am tired enough to reach a band.
However
, I had found a lot of unpredictable accidents when significant moments
such
as I came to the test late because rainfall fell on cats and dogs in the morning. Sometimes I feel life must be related to fortune more or less. In conclusion, I disagree with
this
statement.
Moreover
, I think
this
statement should not speak to any person because it makes them feel depressed more than
this
time. Everybody wishes to achieve a goal so giving finger-crossed is the best way in society.
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