‘Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough’ To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#‘failure #proof #desire #wasn’t #enough’

Some

people

said, "Failure is proof that desire was not strong enough to reach a submit". In my opinion, I did not agree with

this

notion and I will explain my reason in the following paragraph. On the one hand,

This

notion will speak out from elderly

people

such

as teachers or parents. In my experience, I quite listen to

this

notion from a teacher who does not prefer me.

However

, She give a reason that want me to feel interested in her subject because I always failed her test throughout semesters. She is teaching arithmetic but I do not prefer

this

subject and quite favourite social studies and history. I have a bad attitude toward

this

statement because somebody blames other

people

for their own happiness. It has a lot of factors to failure.

Firstly

People

cannot be experts in every field.

Secondly

People

have interested in each field different from other

people

For example

, Teachers could not force all students to prefer and get a high score in maths subjects because students have various experts.

However

, a Teacher can help them achieve basic knowledge of your subject and if students feel interested, they will study in future.

On the other hand

, Everybody wants to succeed and not wish to fail.

For example

, I study and practice IELTS for 3 years. If I cannot achieve a wished band, It is normal that I will be sorrowful even if I am tired enough to reach a band.

However

, I had found a lot of unpredictable accidents when significant moments

such

as I came to the test late because rainfall fell on cats and dogs in the morning. Sometimes I feel life must be related to fortune more or less. In conclusion, I disagree with

this

statement.

Moreover

, I think

this

statement should not speak to any person because it makes them feel depressed more than

this

time. Everybody wishes to achieve a goal so giving finger-crossed is the best way in society.

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