Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their studies in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?
Nowadays, there has been a widespread argument that students face obstacles to
focus
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focusing
school's
subjects. Change noun form
school
This
essay will try to identify the factors contributing to this
and also
explain some solutions that may emerge of
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from
this
.
As we know that children
tend to be active during school time
because movement and social interaction are their way to recharge the
energy. They Change the word
their
are
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easily
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easy
to
get anxious and bored by sitting for a long Fix the infinitive
apply
time
and listening to the teachers explaining materials, so they do another activity. As a consequence, when it comes to studying, it causes them tired
. Change preposition
to tired
Secondly
, it is a
natural that the amount of Change the article
apply
children
's attention time
is not as much as Add an article
an adult
adult
, they may spend less than 90 minutes which the adult usually have. Fix the agreement mistake
adults
For instance
, if children
are encouraged to focus on linguistics lecturers, it will surely lead them to a distraction.
However
, every challenges
could be addressed by including parents to help students overcome their problems. Change to a singular noun
challenge
Children
's guardian
can give Fix the agreement mistake
guardians
time
management training, so children
have a clear border on which occasion they should focus. As a consequence, they spend an effective time
to study
in a class and Change the verb form
studying
reach
an optimum result. Wrong verb form
reaching
Besides
, parents have big authority to discipline their children
by giving them reward
and punishment systems. Add an article
a reward
the reward
For instance
, if children
is
attentive to study Change the verb form
are
in
a certain Change preposition
at
time
, they would receive a present so it
motivates them to make Correct pronoun usage
which
a
progress day by day.
To conclude, by nature, Correct article usage
apply
children
have limited capacity to absorb school materials straight forward, because the
lack of attention power, Change preposition
of the
however
it can be solved by contributing parents in a way of Add the comma(s)
,however
time
schedule and rewarding schemes.Submitted by vmuflihahf on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
