Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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believe that youngsters should do some kinds of charity in their leisure

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habit. I fully agree with

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argument and the details will be discussed in the essay below.

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of all, a person should realize the importance of being a part of the society;

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, he should understand and always remember that populations should only stand still with a sense of

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by knowing the meaning of living in the same neighbourhood.

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habit will penetrate into the personality and become a spontaneous behaviour of the person if it is learned in the early stages of life as

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routine lifestyle. Families or teachers can support the youngsters to attend to some activities related to the benefits of the

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as helping the old people’s groceries. Meanwhile, a teenager can participate in

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any kind of environmental cleaning activities in his free

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either for having a good

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with his friends or to make his vicinity cleaner, which are helping his

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to become a better place.

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research from Oklahoma State University Social Psychology Department has concluded that a teenager’s mental health would become better if he/she attended

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a couple of organizations related to the public without taking any money from that. In conclusion, young people should help

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their

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in their spare

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so that not only their mental health and the

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’s well will become better as well which I

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fully agree with.