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In many countries. paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) app is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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 mobile
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 in the majority of the countries for purchasing products is skyrocketing recently.
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 it has some demerits, the merits are much more. I will discuss both aspects throughout
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 essay. Many
people
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 used to do online shopping through mobile
apps
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 while others even do not know how to
use
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 novel technologies. As a vivid example, uneducated as well as old
people
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 did not learn how to
use
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 mobile
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. still worse they do not know how to
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 smartphones.
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, the security of trading through the web either with mobile
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 or websites has its own drawbacks. Not only the other sides are unknown but
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 hackers could intrusion the computer and mobile systems. So trusting the other side is really hard for inexpert
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 as well as protecting against hackers. one of the major radix benefits of e-commerce
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 as android and I-phone applications is saving time and more security while purchasing products and paying the cost by the phone. Using mobile
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, reduced going to a bank. Most of the financial tasks could be done on the smartphone so it saves the time for whom used these
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. It is much more secure in comparison with moving cash. It could not be lost or even be stolen while the opposite side could happen. To conclude, while there are some drawbacks
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 as using new technologies with unfamiliar
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, they are not insurmountable and teaching them would be a remedial issue.
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 side, the benefits like saving time and increasing security while using financial
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instead
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 of traditional banking systems are prominent.
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