Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves.Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages to this, Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays,

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competitions as a medium to publicize products.

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some people believe there are drawbacks to

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,others think it would benefit the

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and companies.In the forthcoming

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will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide reasons why it is more beneficial. The main benefit of funding

sports

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is

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it provides increased media awareness for companies and their brand.

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,the Arsenal football club of England is being funded by an airline company called the Emirates, so the inscription "fly Emirates" is boldly written on their jersey

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and other

equipments

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.

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agencies provide free

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players

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finances which they cannot afford.

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young children aspiring to be football

players

.

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,

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establishments sponsoring team

players

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events in other to have their products advertised is not a bad idea.

On the other hand

, there are some who beg to differ, for reasons that a player or

players

might misbehave would represent the

business

badly.

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,advertising of brands by agencies can be distracting to the participants not excluding the spectators

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would participate in television interviews,

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sections for these companies

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for the

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sports

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,affecting the team's performance during the competition. In conclusion, in

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discussed that

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the popularity of a brand is at

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peak when the corporation provides support to

sport

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competition

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sometimes it can be

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believe these

sports

organisation

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require funds to achieve their purpose,so promoting company brands is a preferable way for it to be accomplished.