Governments should spend tax money on public libraries rather than public transportation improvements. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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the community.Many folks are of the opinion that the state should utilize a levy stipend on citizen libraries rather than improving local buses and trains.In my opinion,

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will elaborate more in the paragraphs.

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,the transport system is imperative as it connects people all over the world

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,improving local shipping, especially with technology will reduce private vehicles

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that there will be less pollution and money will be saved which can be focused on other priorities.

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research done by the University of Nairobi depicts that 80% of the developed country has

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transport system.

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,the state has a responsibility of utilizing cess in a way that benefits each and every member of the society and

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priority and other alternatives.

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,technology has greatly improved access to information and at a very affordable rate

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that people do not necessarily need to visit a library for

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,there are many rules and regulations in the library

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as keeping silent and returning books within one month.

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universities are downloading books and reading journals online.

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online systems. To sum up,cess collection is fundamental.

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public libraries and transport are made for locals,nowadays information can be accessed online so the executive should spend more money on the travel.