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Tanning salons are used by a wide number of people including teenagers. Medical experts claim that it causes serious diseases, while others believe that it is a personal decision of people to attend tanning salons.

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One of the most controversial issues nowadays is that a vast amount of
people
 tend to apply artificial tan even though of awareness of its significant impact on
skin
,
however
, opponents claim that each person is responsible for the decisions he or she makes. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both views and state my position. In the modern world, when the word "beauty" means a lot to society and it is not only women but
also
 men
participate
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who participate
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 in
this
 useless race. It is certainly true, that tanning booth influences our
skin
 negatively. The well-known fact is that ultraviolet rays are a direct cause of
skin
 cancer and premature
aging
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ageing
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.
For instance
 , an awful truth is that tanning facilities are even providing
this
 service to under 18-year-old
people
 in Canada. A recent survey done by American University in North Carolina revealed that even though
people
 are aware of the risk, they can not help laying down on tanning beds. The population is at high risk of developing cancer disease due to the number of research more than 28 million use beds. Meanwhile, opponents of indoor and outdoor artificial tanning claim disagree with accusing.
Firstly
, the beauty industry has gone far away, so the social awareness of the growing danger led to a high level of responsibility, especially among teenagers who see the irrefutable evidence of frequent use of tanner. Rather than chasing the stereotype of beauty in present days where the idol might change expeditiously and might lose personality.
People
 better take care of their health habits to protect the
skin
 and avoid places like tanning booths which are completely unnecessary.
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