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Some People Think That The Individuals Who Make The Most Money Are The Most successful?

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Defining success is a difficult task. According to the
people
, those who have a lot of
money
 are more successful.
However
, insist that those who make a difference in
society
 through their countless contributions are more profitable. On the one hand, rich
people
 are certainly winning undoubtedly, everyone wants to be rich.
Money
 is the measurement of success. Rich
people
 enjoy every comfort and happiness that
money
 can buy. Better still, they can make a difference to spend their hard earn cash on the needy
society
. Some of them are well known today for their philanthropy; they are helping the world with their
money
 and are still eager to do anything for their
society
. We can not deny their part in humanity because they are saving millions of lives and are happy to become patronage.
On the other hand
, scientists, and
teachers
 both have done incredible work for
this
 world. In comparison with wealthy
people
, they had a bigger impact on
society
. We owe progress we achieve, is the reason is the scientist. They did experiments to save not only
people
’s lives but
also
 save the planet as well. Their contribution is undeniable to the globe if they had not spent their time on progression, we still living in caves and hunting animals for food to survive.
Likewise
,
teachers
 have a big influence on the world because they provided knowledge to
people
, and
people
 become successful
for example
 doters, scientists, and professors it is all possible by the knowledge that we got from our
teachers
. So,
teachers
 make us successful and facilitate us to achieve our goals. In short, anyone who contributed to
society
 with
money
 or knowledge is successful. In my opinion, being successful that not mean wealth
although
 is an important factor but contributing to
society
 can make you more successful as well.
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