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Band 7

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to growing traffic and pollution problem.To what extent do you agree or disagree. What other measure do you think might be effective.

#price #petrol #traffic #pollution #measure
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Nowadays people believe that the solution to
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 congestion as well as contamination is to raise the cost of fuel.
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traffic
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 is becoming exceedingly high
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 there are ways to get it reduced .
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 ,I strongly disagree with the above because there are other ways to tackle these issues which I will discuss in
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, the construction of good roads and levelling of potholes are essential for
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 reduction , when the
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 is in good condition it reduces congestion of
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, as well as pollution, resulting from carbon monoxide release from a slow-moving car,
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, recently there was a great improvement in a
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 in my area was in
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 reduction due to reconstruction and filling of holes .Government should be encouraged to employ a good number of
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 waders in order to control
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 and
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 install
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 lights That are functional to enable the smooth passage of vehicles without congestion .
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 ,car owners should be advised to service the engines of their
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 regularly as well as good engine oils in order to reduce the emission of carbon monoxide that results in pollution . In ,conclusion ,
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 placing a high cost on petrol enables a decrease in
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 as most people cannot afford the cost there by parking their
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 at home which in turn reduces the number of
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 on the
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 I stand that other measures I listed above would be more helpful as people would want to petrol bedroom for other personal need.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • air pollution
  • alternative modes of transport
  • cleaner energy sources
  • disproportionately affect
  • commuting
  • public transportation infrastructure
  • environmentally friendly
  • incentivizing
  • electric vehicles
  • fossil fuels
  • regulations and penalties
  • emissions
  • urban planning
  • walkability
  • cycling-friendly
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